The story “Becky and the Wheels-and-Brake Boys” was written James Berry. It tells of a girl Becky who really wants a bike, she but cant get one until the end of the story. Becky is a credible character. She shows she is credible through what she feels, says, and does.
Becky is believable because she wants to fit in with the cool bicycle riders. For example Becky thinks, “I only want to be with Nat, Aldo, Jimmy, and Ben.” They all have bikes, and she wants one too, so she can ride and play with them. This proves that Becky is credible because lots of people have a time when they want something that will help them fit in with other kids.
Becky keeps asking her mom for a bike. Becky says to herself, “Over and over I told my mom I wanted a bike.” A while later tells her mother, “I still want to have a bike badly.” In order to get what she wants, Becky thinks she has to ask several times and give reasons for how feels towards the item. This shows Becky is believable because many kids love begging for things and the get them
Finally another reason that Becky is credible character is because she always fought with her best friend. As an example Becky thinks, “For the first time me and Shirnette had a real fight because of what I hated most.” Shirnette wanted to get back at Becky because Becky put a centipede up her shirt so she got even by putting a cockroach in Becky's blouse. This proves that Becky is a realistic character because a lot of best friends fight frequently.
In conclusion Becky is credible because of all the things she has done which are what she feels,what she says and what she does.:P
Velasquez, Jahida
March 5,2008
Per2-3
Becky’s Essay
The story “Becky and the Wheels-and-Brake Boys” was written James Berry. It tells of a girl Becky who really wants a bike, she but cant get one until the end of the story. Becky is a credible character. She shows she is credible through what she feels, says, and does.
Becky is believable because she wants to fit in with the cool bicycle riders. For example Becky thinks, “I only want to be with Nat, Aldo, Jimmy, and Ben.” They all have bikes, and she wants one too, so she can ride and play with them. This proves that Becky is credible because lots of people have a time when they want something that will help them fit in with other kids.
Becky keeps asking her mom for a bike. Becky says to herself, “Over and over I told my mom I wanted a bike.” A while later tells her mother, “I still want to have a bike badly.” In order to get what she wants, Becky thinks she has to ask several times and give reasons for how feels towards the item. This shows Becky is believable because many kids love begging for things and the get them
Finally another reason that Becky is credible character is because she always fought with her best friend. As an example Becky thinks, “For the first time me and Shirnette had a real fight because of what I hated most.” Shirnette wanted to get back at Becky because Becky put a centipede up her shirt so she got even by putting a cockroach in Becky's blouse. This proves that Becky is a realistic character because a lot of best friends fight frequently.
In conclusion Becky is credible because of all the things she has done which are what she feels,what she says and what she does.:P